Tuesday, 19 May 2015

My finger :(

It was a Sunday morning. I was at my game. I was playing. one women said ''we are playing red wood. it was time to play i ran onto the field. Mum was saying ''go Libby go''. I was a back. I ran to a  girl she ran at me. The ball was in the middle. The ball got out and... I fell to the ground WOW  that   was a BIG hit. I went to my mum.we went to Nana. She said not to go to the hospital put we did. I got an X-Ray. I went out of the the X-Ray room. The women said my finger was broken. I was happy before she said that my figure was broken. I was happy before she said that my finger was broken. My face fell down. My mum hugged me and we to the waiting room. Mum hugged me some more. She said 'I love you'. My Nana came in with Brooke and said 'are you all right'. I said 'yes I am'. The Doc come in and said that I need stiches. Mum Brooke and Nana hug me. I got my stitch and vommitted. The Doc said that I am not going to play hockey for six weeks. We went to the car and got some McDonald's for lunch. I got some food and went to sleep for 3 hour.

1 comment:

  1. Libby, I like how you used speech marks in this recount. I bet it was hard for you to not play Hockey for 6weeks! Challenge: Reread your story and check for capital letters for 'I' and at the beginning of sentences.

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